Tye and the Voices in the Storm
He was jolted out of his reverie and stood there dazed and drenched. His brand new parka had turned from green to a kind of dirty khaki-brown and green mixed.
The parka had been a very expensive present from mum and dad. Sample question Question Write the opening part of a story about a place during a storm. Attempt 1 It was windy and wet and the road was full of big puddles. Feedback - Basic The writer shows an awareness of the purpose of the task and begins to write an entertaining story. There is some attempt to control the narrative voice but the verb tenses vary from present to past. The ideas are linked well and the structure of the paragraph is good.clp2.eywaapps.dk/libraries
Voices in the Storm
There is little sentence variety and the sentence lengths are all similar, some being too long because of punctuation errors. The vocabulary choices are varied and effective but could be much more ambitious.
Attempt 2 The wind howled and the rain battered down. Feedback - Improving The writer communicates in a clear and effective way and matches the purpose of entertaining with the story form and the intended audience. The flow of images and ideas link nicely to create a well-structured narrative. Sentences are varied in length and type creating a lively voice and help the story to flow. Attempt 3 The wind howled like a banshee turning the rain into a salvo of bullets.
Feedback- Even better The story is absorbing and convincing. Tone, style and voice all match purpose, form and audience to create an engaging narrative. The sentences are varied in length and type to create a lively style. Punctuation is accurate throughout and sophisticated in places with good use of semicolons.
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Payment Methods accepted by seller. Home Kaufmann, Walter Voices in the Storm. Condition: Very Good Soft cover. Save for Later. About this Item The author's scarce first novel. Published in Australia. Text in English. Cover art by Noel Counihan.
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In this his first novel he tells with stark realism the story of a group of underground fighters against Hitler. Woven into the heroic pattern of struggle and resistance, is the life story of a Jewish boy who sees his family disintegrating before the onslaught of Hitler's thugs. With the passion of one who has lived through many of the events described in Voices in the Storm, Walter Kaufmann presents an unforgettable picture of the face of fascism.